Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 5, 2020
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Hi Maea, I love how you added pictures like behind or infront of Jellynana. Have you made a mother Jellynana? If you did make a mum Jellynana would you make it bigger or smaller or the same size? Next time could you make the animation longer and like a routine or something?
ReplyDeleteHello Ava,We were going to mke a mother Jellynanna but then we ran out of time And this is jellynannas daily routine.And if we were going to make a mother jellynanna it would be the same hight but if we were to make her she might end up a bit smaller.Thanks for commenting:)
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ReplyDeleteI really like your story about Jellynanna and can tell you put a lot of work into it. You remind me of my comic I made during lockdown. Maybe next time you could make a Jellynanna story part two!
Hi Brooke,Yes we did put alot of work into the slide show most of it was editing Thank you for commenting and next time we will do a part to from Maea:)
ReplyDeleteI thenk it shoud be called jally nenina
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DeleteHi Toby,Thanks for your comment next time before you post a comment check your spelling.Lots of people think Jelly nanna should be called Jelly nenna but we like his name as it is but Thank you for commenting:)
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ReplyDeleteHi I'm Connor from Yaldhurst Model School
ReplyDeleteI like this post because I like animations and animations are very fun to do. But next time could you keep it on the same picture for a while so the person is looks like it's riding the bike or walking? Not just changing the background every single slide.