Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Urmi. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, November 19, 2020
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Hey Maea! Your slideshow has some good facts! I love all of your description about the history of Hawaii. I like the part were you talk then culture and people. This reminds me of when I went on a trip to Nelson to see some of my family members. Next time try to remember to add punctuation and spaces after a full stop. I just have a question, would you ever visit Hawaii? I really enjoyed your writing, great job!
ReplyDeleteMikaela :)