There are 2 small children up in there house but they had no normal house they had a tree house.there tree ouse is 3 or more storys high and filled with more than 25 native birds living with them some of the birds were kea,kiwi,pukeko and many many more aling with that. At the bottem floor of the house there was a river so it wasent really a floor it was more like a bath or a pool but wait the is a bright red canoe so it acnt be a pool or a bath so I guess it just has to be a river.
Kia ora Maea, great quick write. I like how you didn't just make it about the picture and added your own thoughts in, like the native birds. Kai Pai
ReplyDeletegreat quick write, i like how you put in some of your own thoughts.
ReplyDeleteHello Maea!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used our native birds like the kiwi and the kea. I also like the way you described the canoe. Next time re-checking your writing and the speling.
- Greta!
Hi Maea, GREAT quick write. I love how you described all the things. Next time re read your story.
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