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Friday, August 21, 2020

Quick Write

The world started to shake and before I even noticed what had hapened I saw people taking photos of the earth but why I asked myself. I looked at where my house normaly was I wasnt there so I looked up a little bit and there I saw my house,barn and my animals all floating on the grass patch that my house was normaly on. I  remembered that my family was in my house so I got as close as I could and jumped I bearly made the jump but I did and then we live there for the rest of our lives.

 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Maea, Great imagination! I like that you have thought about what the world felt like when the ground separated. It would be a bit easier to read if the font (letters) was all the same size. Great work.

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